Sounds alright for a dance song but not very different from most others since it seems to hold the same beat style as well. Could spruce it up a bit by making it longer and adding in a few more unique sounds. Could also have it start by using the low filter pass effect on it as well so it has cooler sound to it.
This song sounds pretty good though for your first attempt at a dance song though so very nicely done work with this.
Thanks. I'll try using some different sounds.