This is fun but...
(Bear in mind that this is just my opinion. If you disagree then you have every right to do so :3 and I sincerely hope you're not offended )
I feel like this song is not mixed to its full potential.
This piece begins with a steady kick until a short arpeggiating synth seeks to dwarf it out. The beginning is too overlapping for my taste from 0:18-0:50. The rave theme is moderately well executed until the overlapping begins again at 1:19 through 1:40.
To put it short: Overlapping is present for 53 seconds of a 108 second song which ruins about the half of it for me.
The range of synths is to narrow; that is, the spectrum of variety is little. The filtering put into them as presets or by effect is all to similar on every single one.
Other than that, it is all good :)
Thaks for the advice don't worry im not offended i put songs on so ppl can veiw and give me pointers but the raeson its so rpedative is cause i tried alot of sounds and none of them rlly mixed good so i only had pre much just these sounds