Needs a riff
If you made the bells into a riff with different tones... It would improve the song drastically <---Dont know if I spelled that right >.<... But yeah the bells are a little redundant...I turned my PC down because of the bells...But yeah make a riff of them and itll be tons better ^^
I'm going to assume you're just using FLstudio patches with little mastering. That makes for an extremely unoriginal sounding and flat piece. There are plenty of free vsts online that can bring some originality to your work. No effects make your song sound very unexciting and basic, study up on EQ and mastering. It'll make or break a song.
Aside from that, the melody feels a bit uninspired. The same bell patch and some kicks and claps. Some of it has sloppy timing and disharmonic notes, but these can be solved with a little practice.
Just keep up the work, look up some VSTs, and figure out how to use the mixer to give your song flavor.
Yeah, I felt quite sheepish about this one. I did make a dub with a wobble bass that I made myself, but that is the most original sound I have in any of my songs. Just sayin', thanks for the review, EVEN if you rated low!