its good for your first
first i like how you put its genre as house when its electro haha...
0:44 is when it.. sorta losses my liking....
but it is good, i would like to think you use FL Studio correct?
if you do you know just look up videos on youtube on how to do effects and stuff
And i'd guess that you were just warning people it was your first with the title(do that in the author comments even tho they might not read it) but i personally don't think you should do that, try to get a catchy name
keep trying this done well for your "first try"