Love it dude
This is my fav cos theres a lotta work that can be done to this to create it to perfection, i see what you mean bout the kick, geeeeez, what are you tryin to do buddy? destroy your song? HAHA, im feelin the melody in this, theres a lotta work that you can do to make this melody awesome! on one of your other songs im hearin you put like 2 or 3 hours work into em, more! as much time as you can try without overcoming with love for the music and jus throwing it out there, this thing can be mastered, if you want my help, chuck me a pm, i'll give you an idea..