Wow

I'm actually surprised by how simple (no offense) but amazing this. On the downside the track is a bit short but amazing none the less.

mmm I don't know.

I agree with Gravey on the layering. THe song seems lacking and almost empty for the most part. I'd even say try working with a different type of synth. The opening to this song has a lot of potential. You could even use that to just start anew with this if youeven wanted to or do your own remix. To be honost though bro and i know its your third song its just not really up to par. Just keep up the practice and you'll get your own sound before you know it.

As i've said before it feels pretty empty. Just work on your layering, and background instrumentation for now get yourself familure with putting together a fully automated tune and then youcan worry about other things LOL. Your well on your way.

Wyldfyre1

Alright...

For starters this track is quite simple. I would add more layers, such as pads and percussion rhythms. Right now you just have a base of synths and a simple drum rhythm for structure. Which is fine, but you need to add on top of this.

The mix also sounds rather dry. I would work on fattening up some of the synths and adding some reverb on a few for atmosphere. Or even better add some pads in the background to create more atmosphere.

The synth that comes in at 1:05 is just horrible. You need to get rid of that line. It doesn't even fit melodically. So please, that needs to be changed or just thrown out. Either way, do something with it.

For the most part this isn't so much a bad tune, as it is just an unfinished one. This is something that needs to be expanded and given room to grow. So go back and add layers and length to make is fuller and more robust.

3/5 and 5/10 overall.

-Gravey-