different, but nice
All in all, it's not a bad song. I believe the very beginning was really bland for about 35 seconds, but then the main line came in and I was hooked. I loved after that. I see the others commented that bass or a harmony might be in order I definitely agree with these claims. The first time I listened I only half heard it and I was tired so it didn't seem to great, but then I listened again and it sounded fantabulous. I enjoy the progression quite a bit. Although I notice a pattern in all your music that you enjoy having a drop point in the middle of your songs to re-build and create an even better climax the second time, but in my opinion the drop off point(2:25) in this song almost made me want to leave. It got really dry for about a minute, but then at about 3:48 the excitement began to crawl back in and I was once again hooked. If there's anything I can say, it's this: Return to your intro and add something to attract listeners sooner or else they may leave before it gets good, and don't drop off the main melody for too long unless you have something fast or catchy there to keep your audience's attention.
Hope I was helpful :D
Hey Fantastic Job! =3
This music is pretty epic, and I like the way it builds up. You have a talent my friend!
Thanks =D I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I thought it wasn't going to be that good at first but I kept listening and I Really like it dude, the only thing I can think of is for the transitions add a frequency filter so it sounds more blended in when your adding a new sound or changing the idea, which you do you sometimes, but I guess just use more. Sick song tho.
hey i really thought you enjoyed it, thanks for the feedback. What do you mean by a frequency filter. The thing i fail at is manipulating the software, i do what i can to get the sound i want, but sometimes smoothness is an issue, and I don't know how to adjust the limiter properly and all that. If you could give me some specific advice i'd greatly appreciate that. Again, glad you enjoyed it!
i liked it but,
the intro was rather thin,i think it needs like a background sound or a pluck or bass.but after awhile it gets better,thicker and more fluid.the drums are good but the trastiostions arent that great,but good nonethe less.
id say give it a little bit more effort and work on the intro really good stuff u got here.
thanks, i know the transitions are weak, thats the main flaw of this song, but yeah the intro is meant to be thin and build. I had a friend who said the same thing, but i want the bass to hold off a bit, idk, maybe i'll try it with it and see what I think. Thanks a lot though for the feedback, i appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed my music =]
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