The different instruments were used in an efficient way. The way they were used was good, you clearly improved since "Why She". You should have made a conclusion part for the song because the way it ends is way too harsh.
I didn't really liked the beat, when you stop hearing it, it's quite a relief, the song feels way better without it. But I think the problem mainly comes from how they sound rather than their presence in the music.
You need to get deeper and better samples because your song have that perpetual "midi feeling". I think it's because the sounds in it are too "dry", they doesn't last long enough (the organ and most of the sample used for the melodic bassline were good enough imo, they were really good).
So, in conclusion, nice feeling despite some problems that are more the fault of the samples rather than their use. It's not the kind of thing I'd listen often since it lacks that "thing" that makes me tap my fingers to it. But you sure are on the right way.
Hey thank you for the review, these days I use Vengeance packs for the beat and it souds a way better and I am diving in a really soft style of psy trance. I think you need to hear my newest song on youtube.
A solid and decent effort!
- The off percussion at 0:45 was an interesting touch.
- Like the piano at 1:20. I am a piano fan.
- Rhodes Piano at around 2:00 with the light Sawtooth(?) was a fun combination.
- The bass and synth got old very fast, giving me a feel of declining enthusiasm for hearing it. Liven it up more with a change in the basic feel.
- Part at 1:20.
Overall Feel: Not bad, I think. Maybe it could stand for improvement, but it is fine if you choose to leave it alone.
The part at 2:00 was actualy a jazz guitar but, I had the same feeling about this song as you had I think.
I liked this. I really kicks in around 0:22 but the thing around 0:55-1:09 gets kinda old fast.
Thank you for your review! so your vote goes to 0:00-00:34?