Not bad. Though I don't really like the choice of synth for the melody. As said below, the bass could use some work. It's not great by any means, it sounds kind of empty, maybe add at least one extra synth to fix that. Keep it up though!
lol this is just a d preset so far befor i call it done there will be atleast 3
lol. some of the bass probs have been fixed as for the kick i dont wanna change it to much cos i dont understand what im doing fully yet
dont worry this isent close to being done :)
this is sounding more like it,
the only thing that needs to be done now is stretch the tail out
what i mean by tail is the last part of the kick that makes the distortion sound.
okay :D will do
hmm and push the distorted one up a bit more
thin lv everything agen
any other tips?