I give my 4/5 and 8/10 to this.
The ending was probably the high note in this song. The rest wasn't horrible, but it could've used a bit more improvement.
I agree, I actually ended up putting way more thought into the chorus and the ending then anything else...Im just unsure as to how to give the intro a little pick me up.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.