love venetian snares
The pads seem too basic. The melody to repetitive. I've noticed in alot of IDM and stuff similar to this that things are often slightly detuned and out of pitch.
Otherwise good work on the drums. Try to continue to mix those up and introduce new samples to keep it interesting. Also work on filters and delay effects.
Overall transitioning would be good.
Welcome back to submissions.
thaks i appreciate the feedback. i know everything's really basic, but this was just an experiment.