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Started before scarcity and finally decided to finish today


Not bad.

This isn't too bad, pretty decent work on it.

That was pretty spankin'

I like it I like it I LOVE IT

IamMark responds:

Well, that's what I posted it for =) thanks for the review

not best but good

i like the beat but it needs more bass.

IamMark responds:

Bass huh? that is do-able, but from what I am noticing my remade songs are gettin worse scores than the originals. Maybe the next song...

Im glad your title...

said exactly how this song was going to sound. Sytrue is nice, but formulating a whole song around it requires a little more diversity.
You can look at my looming abyss song, i did it all with sytrus. The melody was too basic-not really there. Im glad you incorporated more instruments, but they did little to add to the feel of a song. You def should have ended it when the synth went solo after like three minutes

Then it just starts to drag.....
You know what your doing, you will see improovement

IamMark responds:

Yeah I know it kinda dragged a bit, but I was being a little stubborn about changing it since I wanted people to hear where I made the changes from how it started. I can't do too much with sytrus since i need a faster computer so I had to stay pretty basic. But since my songs are starting to get more complex I will need to upgrade pretty soon. Just keep in mind I have been at this for less than a year and my progress is a lot more now than when i started. Thanks for the review RyeGuy, You are one of my favorite artists on here already and just getting a review from you makes me happy.

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1.58 / 5.00

Dec 17, 2005
9:13 PM EST
File Info
3.6 MB
3 min 58 sec

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