Very nice :D
Reminds me of the happy times i had as a little kid.
Now along the lines of criticism, it was a bit harsh in the beginning like i wasn't expecting that heavy heavy heavy bass as the main lead. But i have to say nice transitions and great song.
Idk why ppl are like could be better... sure everything could use improvement but be proud of what u have here dude.
-- well i like it to say the least.
-See u on the Audio Portal
This is definitely an improvement on your other songs. Seeing as this is a song and not a loop, I think you need to add a nice finish to it. Also, I think you need to look into more chord progressions, to add a variety, because this was too repetitive. I like the sounds used and the fading in and out effect. Nice job!
decent but could be better.
It was decent, i liked the use of fading, but there was much variety in the tune. It was pretty general with how it went. Maybe next time add a bit more like change up the melody a bit and have the bass switch sounds to fit the changed melody. other than that it was pretty good better than what i can do.