Good Good Good!
Nice, unfortunately u lost me in the beginning, and towards the middle i was looking for the beat. But all in all it is a good composition. lol and btw nice ending!
For future reference with a remix, you are putting your style into the song. If u need to tweak it to make it sound better, do just that.
Anyway nice song (again)
~Xarosas (Keep it up man!)
okay first off you need to have some bass in a song or its nothing and for the melody dont just stick right with the time signature play its more like the song have some notes on the off beats and some on the down beats just put them where they need to go basically