I love it
Sounds like something I would play on the piano :) it really makes me think about things. Real songs should make you do that, right? Anyways, good job! :)
i actually wrote it on the piano, key of c major if you're curious. glad you enjoyed!
Everything is technically on beat but having the beat carried on such a weird offbeat makes it feel very crazy, if you were to shift the beat by what seems to be 2 sixteenths, it would feel more regular. Personally it bugs me but the rest of the song is nice.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.