Between Dreams

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I've been working on this for a few days now.

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Slightly messy in the beginning.

I love your synths, there's nothing to complain about that. It's got enough variety, nice melodies, rythmic patterns, it's all great.
Now my only concern is your beat. At the beginning I smell a percussion loop. It just has that certain feel to it. (correct me if I'm wrong, if I am, I'm terribly sorry :P)
I don't really like it that much, it certainly doesn't feel natural. I mean, it sounds good and professional in a certain way, but I can't really figure out what it is, it just sounds extremely standard, professional, but not really in a great way. Anyway, apart from that, after you've introduced that beat, you overlap it with a classic boomclap rythm. It's powerful and doesn't have much low frequencies and good reverb, it's a classic and great sound. Now it's a great sound, but when you play it over that other beat, it sounds kinda messy. It's like eating steak and vanilla-strawberry icecream. It's both great, but together it's not a great combo. Unless you do like that, that'd be pretty awkward :P.
Anyway, that's my only concern, the melodies and plucked synths were awesome, and I loved your melodies, especially the syncopic downward melody at 1:29, perfect. The percussion I did not yet comment on was simply great, good resonance and frequencies, nicely mastered, professional sound. And I loved your use of filters. I loved the dreamy feel and your variety in your melodies, It makes it so not repetitive! :D
Anyway, great job, keep it up man! :D

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This is one of the best - but I agree, try to make a longer version, maybe go off on a fun side trip between 1:23 and 1:42, then return to your theme. This has a great rolling beat overall and great build-up/suspense.

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Well Done

This the first time I have reviewed your music and i must say, well done. This song keeps a nice continuing beat while maintaining variety. However, I'm giving a nine since there is still some room for improvement, such as maybe lengthening the song? Other than that, keep on doing what you love! 5/5---9/10


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I have no technical advice or anything like that but this was awesome, it flowed, it was never boring i love the melody and the beat it was perfect.

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Very nice beginning!

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Credits & Info

4.46 / 5.00

Dec 21, 2010
8:26 PM EST
File Info
6.1 MB
2 min 40 sec

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