Too much for one song
I like the ideas you tried using, but it doesn't really flow into the whole "funk" theme very well. You've got a lot going on; you should try splitting this song into two individual ones at the 1:40 mark.
cool use of garage band man!
I cannot stand your kit sound, that snare makes me want to punch dying african aids babies. I think you have a good idea going. I liked whenever the strings came in. But I think you could definitely use some mixing. I'm not going to let the snare affect everything though. This was a pretty cool song. I like how much it changes. This is definitely a very interesting track.