I like the melodies but that snare needs less low and mid and more treble. I just can't hear it. I love the synths you used as well. another thing to note is that the kick is a little overpowering. also, do a bit more with that saw i think you are using as bas. the half note thing gets old pretty quick. I love what comes in at 3:12! it really plays with my ears. =D check out my music if you get the chance!
I think 1:00 is little long to drag out an intro with only a single instrument. It had good melodies, it's just it felt like it needed to build more.
Also at 1:20, I like the bass. There's alot of it, it just feels like the lead synths don't sit well on it. I'd try messing around with the EQ to get em to fit better.
the snare roll at 3:11 was really overpowering, it cut out everything else :/
I do enjoy me some synth shredding, good stuff lol.
-And the transition with the LP filter was really nice.
You've got alot of ideas flying around in this song, and it feels like towards the end it kind of trails off. If you lengthened the song, and gave each segment a chance to breath, I feel like this whole track would flow a little better. It is an interesting style though, and I would like to hear more. You can only get better at it right? :D
Thank you for the kind review!
You were probably right about the intro, I should have added a couple more instruments to it as it went along.
If I can somehow recover the data from that song before my computer completely crashed a couple of days ago, I will definitely fill in some of the holes in the sound around 1:20. The overpowering snare roll at 3:11 was an unintended side effect of my mastering, and in the future I will try and fix that.
This was an incredibly helpful review, so again, thanks!
Very new sound for you
I'm liking this a lot - great melody and I like thinking that this is really the sound of silver
Thanks! Yeah, I sort of thought silver would have a twinkling sort of sound.
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