I like it. A lot. Add a tiny bit of verb to your vocals...they sound good...I just think it will benefit the style of this recording. I love the subtle piano, and the guitar sounds great. The "mumbling" section is really cool too. I dig.
Well, thank you so much!! :D I sure will work on this song a little more :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.