have i heard this before...
why does it sound like i have heard this song before....? interesting song... btw...
meh, not good. not really.
the song had a great opening that you could have done so much more with. your drum line is absolutely horrendous. consider giving the drum line more depth. it would be more acceptable to have that bass line if you had more depth in tone, say a better harmony to melody to ratio. not only that though, but songs aren't all about tremolo, fade, phasers, wahs, freq shifts, equalizers, at all. you need to have a basic song structure before you can boost your song's ego with flashy effects. otherwise it gets extremely repetitive and annoying. you really need to work with tone depth over all. thats pretty much it. what you created is a skeleton of a song. those sound terrible alone, you could do so much more.
Keep working at it, you'll find a decent sound soon. you show a little potential.
Decent sounds, bad song structure
Well just throwing comments around like "bad sound structure" is like a vague idea. meaning i dont get what im supposed to fix and what not to. And another thing, i hate it when people who dont make music bash on others.
was horrible but i liked the water type of musis/beat could use more instrumeants