The drum fill at the end is perfect. Its hard to give criticism because it's a really good, solid piece. Perhaps I would suggest bringing back the instrumental background in the intro at some point, even very low behind the heavy guitar riffs for atmosphere, barely noticeable.
Very Metal \m/
Extremely tight guitars and drums which I love, nice evil harmonies on the guitar, love the change up in tempo from double bass kicks to the half time chugging near the end, well produced also.
Can't come up with any criticism I really enjoyed this 9/10 5/5
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