Rebirth of Dawn 2

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Last one didn't work. Hopefully this one will.


Bittersweet Rebirth!

exceptional melody! I think this is my favorite amongst what you have here. Because I loved this so much, I INSTANTLY turned to uber critical mode, where I try to find fault. It was very difficult, but here goes anyways.

I think the high pitched piano notes should be accompanied with some heavier, lower notes. Even just a repeating deep note would make it resonate more. Like what you did when the strings took a little break, and the heavy piano notes came in for a short time. If you did something like that for the harp/high pitched piano note, I think it may improve the piece.

However when the high pitched piano notes first come in, keep that, that was good. I'm referring to when the piano comes back, add a little extra flavour to it.

The piano solo at the end was a bit off, I would have ended the song with just the fading of strings, or a harp and piano duo ending. I LOVED this whole dance with the strings harp and Staccato strings (I think they're Staccato).

The only reason I've written so much, is because I geniuenly care for this piece. Congrats, keep them coming.

*5'age if more from me*

Slayer-of-trolls responds:

Thanks! I'm a fan of your work.

The pizzicato strings and harp is my favorite part too. It sounds like it's tripping and then it comes back around agian. I originaly had a piano play with the longer melody in a lower octive.

I'll try that but it probably won't be for a while. I'm getting sick of this song.

Thanks for review


Absolute KILLER! Such wicked music you make! I tried to put your "Gravsend" into a metal song...but my distortion pedal sucks, and without the sound I wanted I didn't want to ruin your work. When I do finish it, I would like send it to you first, and if you like it and aren't offended by it, then I will post it as you being the main author. You can contact me at bad-man-inc@hotmail.com. Anyways man, Killer stuff!!

Slayer-of-trolls responds:

Awesome! I'd love to hear it. I working on some even better stuff than this. I hope to upload it in the next couple of days. I think this one is too repetitive. So check it out. And if you want me to send you the original file for gravesend I can do that. Thanks for the review man.

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4.06 / 5.00

Dec 13, 2005
2:10 PM EST
File Info
2.4 MB
1 min 46 sec

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