{RDK} Darkness {RDK}

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A song written by Me. explains an emotional condition. the quality may suck. sorry for that.

the beat was made by C-Enterprise who can be found here

http://c-enterprise.newgr ounds.com/


its black and swirling all around me, its stabbed and now im like a zombie, cold pale and dead on the inside, frozen failed and hell i cant try, cursed to walk as a living wreck, on a hand of twos all in is the bet, Death says check Life decides to raise, saving my face gotta see how this plays, Death wins the bet but Life cannot lose, wit one more chance brains imma bruise, cant stand up but i can back down, Death and life struggles for my soul in the ground, Death loves me thats why she wants me in thwe dirt, but Life needs me fo her to do some work, but i only got one question and i hope that u can answer, is it an obsession or is Their fight like a cancer?

this void in my heart this void in my soul, eats me up as i lose all control, ive lost a virtue one i cant regain, walk thru acid rain im tired of the pain, this rain is my tears, the darkness my fear, just a lil different in all that i appear, cant you understand, Life and Death hand in hand, my soul is in the balance, counterweighted by talent, only one thing keeps me breathing, cant tell you cause the darkness is seeping, its filling in my brain, slowly going insane, all the voices tellin me to my to end the pain, should i let Death win this wager with Life? or should i kill em both never to die?


nice, nice

Lyrics and flow were pretty good Id say. Yea the quality is killing it though. You could get an average mic for under $100. I also recommend getting an FL crack or something. That would help tremendously! If ya arent using a rockband, use it! Thats what I did for the longest time. haha Well enough about the quality; this is a solid track otherwise. 5/5 8/10 and Keep up!


death2frame responds:

i have fl 9 crack, asfor the mic im using a rockband mic.for recording the audio im using audacity....how would fl help? message me and let me kno

Needs Work

The music sounds good, but the voice needs some editing.

death2frame responds:

no wat the voice needs is a better mic

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Credits & Info


1.38 / 5.00

Dec 14, 2010
7:55 PM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
2.3 MB
2 min 30 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.