It was good until you took out the bassline. The song was very weak at that part. Overall, pretty good. Ending was kind of adrupt, but that was probably because its supposed to be a loop. Make more stuff like this. I'm an Industrial Junkie. NIN fan.
Yeah, this one was definately ninfluenced. You can count on more stuff like this in the future; hopefully better stuff as I get to know the software.
Thanks for the review!