Ey bruh the lyrics are on point!!! my only criticism is stayin on concept, quality, mixing, delivery, it sounds forced..try re-writing some lines using other words n make it flow easier.. I LIKE IT THO BRUH i been sittin on this for a minute!! You wanna be on it foreal? i Get 2 verses u get 2 verses..with the right Mic u would sound good on track..plus ive been waitin to do this with someone for a loooong time....send me ur email, so when i finish my first verse i can send it to you so u get a feel for the concept and energy of the song u know? and the message! HOLLA ATCHA BOY **muzik_iz_art**
Pretty hot lyrics.
I fucks with it. Keep doing your thang homie... Only problem I got about the track is.... the hook is about "The Underground" but yet your rapping about a girl... unless the underground is a girl.. O_o
The thing about making rap songs.. you gotta stay relevant to the hook. I hope you take into consideration.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.