the guitar

sounds like you maid it up shortly before doing this or like you where playing around to test ur distortion or something along thos lines
loops in a odd spot and the high part of this song are alll missing so it fills emprty
distortion wasent over done
drums have no fill in them nothings in debth. id use a syth or drum kit on fl or something for the drums to get a real debth in to this sounds like the freaks range from 20-20 to me and that itself bugs me.
what are you useing to wire ur guitar to record it btw?
ps this is not to insolt you in any way this is to let you know what i think needs work
-MiB!-

To be honest,

I agreed with you at first about the distortion, but after about a minute, I've changed my mind. I think it's perfect. It's like a different instrument and vibe entirely, and I think it works excellently with the mellow background, which is filtered very well. And it loops amazingly.
Sorry I don't have any criticism, I really enjoyed it. Maybe add a little something to the percussion to change it up every once in awhile. But even thats a bit unnecessary probably.

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