a little advisor(well,sorta little)
I think you ment to make somewhat of a remake of "through the fire and the flames"in a techno way or so,but at least the title looked that way. the loud "exchange" in 0.30-0.36 is really what I think is what messed up or created the conflict in the song. how?the whole song is a quiet type in my rating and that loud part really caught my attention. Other than that, your release is very quite authentic complying that its your first creation in the audio area. I would also like to say that the length of the audio was not quite as long as I expected,conceiving that its only 1 minute and 34 seconds long.The real expression of a heavy metal,rock, or just metal is normally loud and rough, but it can also have some slow, sooth melody's to it.Not saying that this audio is bad,but it could use some work.keep trying, don't give up, and do you're best.
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