Flame of Eternity

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Flame of Eternity - my first attempt at a rock/metal sound in my music.
please comment, I would greatly appreciate it.

I know it's not metal, i just can't wrap my mind around.

I got my inspiration from goukisan, if you were wondering, but added my own spin on his style.

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I think you ment to make somewhat of a remake of "through the fire and the flames"in a techno way or so,but at least the title looked that way. the loud "exchange" in 0.30-0.36 is really what I think is what messed up or created the conflict in the song. how?the whole song is a quiet type in my rating and that loud part really caught my attention. Other than that, your release is very quite authentic complying that its your first creation in the audio area. I would also like to say that the length of the audio was not quite as long as I expected,conceiving that its only 1 minute and 34 seconds long.The real expression of a heavy metal,rock, or just metal is normally loud and rough, but it can also have some slow, sooth melody's to it.Not saying that this audio is bad,but it could use some work.keep trying, don't give up, and do you're best.

~~~~XXMORTALXKOMBATXX, being very awesome

lantaren responds:

Ok, so heres the thing - This is not related to dragon force in any way. I actually based it of of goukisans' audio stuff. The title also was randomly chosen because of how it sounded to me - if you can PM me with another title name, that would be a great help. I will also edit out that part, not quite sure what happened there. I also just updated it - 3 mins 34 seconds long - completely new solo thing added at 1:15 for your enjoyment - I also fixed the problem that you had stated.

not heavy metal but still EPIC

yeah, its not really metal but i still REALLY enjoyed it, its a simple but very effective track and if you can extend, then little add some vocal bits i think itd be a hit!

lantaren responds:

Yeah, I made it longer now - 3 mins and 34 seconds long with new solo in as stated above. please pm me with your comments on the longer version.

Heavy Metal?

This doesn't sound to heavy metal, it sounds to me like techno. There is a part at 0:31-0:36 where it gets loud and kind of kills the whole song. Since this is your first time with this genre, I'm not telling you to stop, but to keep trying. Try using different sounds next time for the instruments.

P.S. I say heavy metal because that is what it says under File Information.

lantaren responds:

Sorry for it not being what you expected - I didn't know what to put it as, but since it didn't really have the synthesizer I didn't think to call it techno. so based on this should I add synthesizers to it, or put it to a different genre such as general rock? please PM me with an answer if you can.

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Dec 12, 2010
4:02 PM EST
Heavy Metal
File Info
2.4 MB
3 min 34 sec

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