Not bad, I like the melodies but there are a few things I would like to mention.
First of all, I think overall it's too loud. Try re-mastering it.
Second, I can't really hear the kick meaning that there needs to be more EQ'ing.
Overall, I think you did a great job! :)
Thanks! I really suck at mastering though...
Yeah sounds definately a lot better :P.
Intro is awesome.
Start working more on your own stuff :D
Yeah, well originally I noticed I had a "His Fantasy III" .flp in my folder, I looked at it... and decided I should improve it! That's how I decide what to work on. I forget what half my songs are. xD
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.