Very nice!
I love this song!! really... very nice intro and sounds!! This would be nice for a remix too!!
Author Comments
Wasn't quite sure what genre to put this into...Trance seemed like a good idea, but if anyone else thinks it should be somewhere else, please let me know!
First time submitting a song, first time making a song! Used DarkWave. Pretty much just playing around with this one. Only worked on it for a couple hours.
The vst I used for this one were Silkworm, ilosynth and Wollo beat.
Hope you enjoy!
gingerspine responds:
Thanks very much! Now that I have FL Studio I'll hopefully be able to rewrite this one and make it a lot better. :)
Very good for your first time! O.o
Much better than my much more orderly then my though repetetive its still awesome lol and i dont mean this to be offensive or sarcastic im speaking the truth lol but i love the outro
gingerspine responds:
Yeah, I need to fix it, make it longer/better/something. Definitely don't think of your comment as offensive or sarcastic. I appreciate the constructive criticism! I'm glad you liked it. :p
Really nice
First of all, I want to thank you again for reviewing one of my songs. I thought I would return the favour, and ended up favoriting you! Really nice! Well, you may have noticed I didn't give it a 10, well, I'm gonna explain this now.
Good: Nice mellody and harmony, the percursion was well-positioned, and a nice use of the effects.
Bad: It was repetitive... It's basically the same melody all over.
I'm not saying this to flame you or anything. I'm just saying this so you could improve in your next songs, which I really hope you post here. IMO, you should get this piece, and work it into a bigger and varied song.
Good luck out there and Rock On!
gingerspine responds:
Thanks very much! I love getting constructive criticism, as long as I can learn from it. :D
Very helpful comment; yeah, its definitely repetitive. When I get better at writing music I'll come back and make this one better. Thanks so much for the favourite!
And you're very welcome for the review.
awesome
the beginning was great how it faded in, it was also mysterious and had a good feeling to it. the drums fit in perfectly. i like the synth that switches between left pan and right pan, if you now what i mean.
hope to see you submit more pieces in the future!
5/5
10/10
gingerspine responds:
:O wow, thank you so much!
I'm working on a couple new ones now, but I hate them, so it might take a while for me to post more, lol.
umm, I think I might know what you mean...I really don't know anything about music, unfortunately. Wish I did!
Thanks for going into detail about what you liked. Very helpful!
Niice
I found this pretty amazing because it feels uncommon. It's pretty unique, and I can also see why you'd have a hard time placing it in a genre, but its so cool.
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gingerspine responds:
Thank you very much for the feedback! Yeah, I had no idea where to put it. (>.<)
I'm so glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun with it. Looking back, I can hear a lot of mistakes, but I'm getting better! :)
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