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What should come next? Please give me advice/feedback! :D

Made using Garageband, this is all written by me using the piano roll feature.



is this song like a demo? If it is, then make the song end 2:20 min to 2:50 min, at the end put in more beats, more sound, at the ending make the beats to it's best as possible then end with a long beat,drum like the song freezed at the highest tempo or something like that, well, i'm imagining how the song would be like now

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livewiresound13 responds:

That's awesome advice! I've changed it a lot, but I'm using a lot of ideas from the earlier version to make a new song.

Thanks so much for the suggestions, cause they'll really come in handy. :D

nice start

you have some really great stuff here! however, it is really short. what i would recommend for you to do would be to develop your transitions. the transition from the first section to the second at :11 is way too sudden. you add multiple layers at once and it is just too much. the second synth along with the change in drums gives the feeling of a different song. maybe draw it out into two steps. first add on the synth and then build the drums. the second transition (:28) is also very sudden. work on your transitions and elongate and you could have a real top notch piece! oh and you might want to try downloading some new drum synths.

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livewiresound13 responds:

The edited version I put up is way different from the first version I posted, so the transitions should be a lot smoother, but I'll keep that in mind when I use some of my old ideas in new songs. Thanks!

its good

its good but tooo short which makes the ending abrupt but it othewise nice

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livewiresound13 responds:

Thanks! I've already started making it longer, I'll post it when it's finished. :D

keep at it

i have to agree with xivicxs, this has potential for several songs instead of one. the song up till 11 seconds is one, the bass line type synth another. and then the synthesized organ is another, different progressions make it hard for them to mesh well. hopefully u get what i mean. keep at it lots of potential


livewiresound13 responds:

Thank you for the advice. :)

Many Great Ideas

This song appears to have different themes of each different song. Try making three different songs of this one. I liked the adventurous theme as well. 8/10

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livewiresound13 responds:

What do you mean by "each different song"? I'm not sure if you hear it much differently than I do, but it seems to me that all the parts are similar. Maybe some clarification? Thanks for the review!

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Credits & Info

4.57 / 5.00

Dec 7, 2010
11:09 PM EST
File Info
781.6 KB
34 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.