Your best by far.
This is really simple compared to most things. You work is very basic but it is solid. I can tell you use FL studio by the sounds lol. Try using a limiter on the kick. I would suggest toying with the noise gate. This can help your kick drum sounds. I think once you add more layers and automation to your pieces and learn how to mix and master well you we be making great music. This does take time though so keep at it.
Thanks for the review Feast. We will take everything you said into consideration. =]
We are trying to make the quality better on all of the pieces so that the full versions can come out clean. But thanks for the reviews appreciate it!
not a fan of the first 10 seconds, just feel like something more could be done with that beat. I like the little tune that starts up after that but by the time that tune repeats again at 52 seconds I feel like something else should start up or change, I don't feel like it should repeat for too long without something happening. I like the echo feel at the end.
But this is all just my personal opinion. Its still a pretty good piece.
Thanks for your review, we are working on adding more to it, and hopefully we will have it done by the end of the weekend!
I'm assuming you're going to add more melodies to spice it up. You should really throw a little reverb in the drums and equalize them. This makes them sound more realistic and less sampled.
Also, experiment with panning and stereo sound. Having all your instruments in one place is rather boring.
You just need to mix it well. Hopefully you'll garner a lot more attention next time because it still sounds really nice!
Thanks for the review man! We will take everything you said into consideration :D