it was good...
i liked it, although it could have used a little more clarity,
as well as some variety.
still, very good for your first song.
ill be watching you.
I couldnt see if it was your song i was listening coz it was Dark in here but I killed the Fear(with Mk22 it took me 5 minutes),then I took my lampynd the light showed me a black "X" on the floor, so I took my spadel, I made a hole and...I wrote this!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhahaah.....sorry gtg I got a history-geography exam tmr.