A quick couple of things
You got your timing down on the track, and that's actually something that's real important. You sound as if you're too close to the mic, which makes it difficult to understand your words most of the time. But your flow is nice. Unfortunately, that doesn't make up for the inability to understand what you're saying. With better quality this would sound pro.
I know you said yours wasn't near studio quality, and honestly it's not about the quality on a website like this. But I'm not sure if you have a popper screen for your mic. If you do, move it back about 4-6 inches from the mic. If you don't, hold the mic back about 6-8 inches from your face. I ran into a similar problem when I first started recording, but only because I had a computer, a pre-amp and a concert mic (which is horrible for recording, but can be worked with).
But still, good work fam. Appreciate you coming through the page. It's good to see fans that love real hip-hop. Did you check out the Newgrounds Battle?
Nimbus The General
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Definitely voting As Respect
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thanks alot man - mabey spread the link to your friends --- i appriate the feed back - ps, i suck at spelling haha
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