Nice melody indeed.
I think my only nit would be it lacks any real variety through the music, aside from changes in the on/off precussion and the additional of an additional instrument here and there.
Still, I don't think there is anything wrong with it and it loops quite well. It would probably work alright in an RPG game setting. :)
Nice melody. Lacks on the climax
The melody itself is perfectly fine. But the music lacks deepness for a trance one. You should put legato samples that would accentuate the atmsophere, because, you see, when I listen to it, I feel like the instruments are a bit "alone". And it really bothers me. Also, the beat is too fast for what it is. Or maybe isn't it its speed, but the sample used for it. They are a bit throbbing, see ? Maybe if you made them more discreet, it would be better. Or just make its sound last longer.
I don't know if my review is clear or not but the song has potential. You just need to be more honest on what you really want it to be.
Really thank you for the review because, now I know how to improve, and it really bothered me that no one told me how, so, I will work on wat you said and hope my next song is better.
Weird is it just me or
For some reason the download sounds a lot better.
I know, its really irritating that when you submit something, its always worser then it normaly is.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.