That dude below me doesnt know what the heck he is talking about. Not all music is supposed to sound radio friendly. I for one actually liked it. This is exactly what I am looking for in ambient music. Very good tunes going on in this and it does give the listener a wierd and almost creepy sensation. What it does need, if I may say so, is more variation and I think the instrument quality could be better. But I understand money is an issue when dealing with plugins and VSTs.
MY FUCKING EARS MAN!
Aside from the FUCKING LOUD NOISE BLARING OUT OF MY SPEAKERS.....
It's very "jumbled" and not very "clear" - but the song is decent if you JUST made your FIRST song without ANY practice.
Keep working - you'll get better!
not to bad dude good job
not easy useing FL i use magix studio