It has a good concept but it lacks something. I think that the staccato notes of the organ are quite annoying, and it doesn't have a direct feel to the music. You should add a bass organ that plays some notes that are part of the main riff. Although it is a good direction, it just does not have enough legato notes, making the song seem skippy and just not well put together.
hmmm....i'l look into it. i'm not sure i feel the same way....but i think i can see your point.
Thank you for actually taking the time to write a review though! Thats what i'm here for.