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Hi there.

I was searching through my flp's and found this. I started this a couple months ago and never ended up finishing it.

I've decided to upload this as a work in progress, which means that I'll likely complete this in the near future.

The mixing and mastering on this is semi bad, but eh.

Some credit goes to my buddy steven-mcl aka. Zerest for the piano melody.

If you decide to review, make sure it is constructive criticism. Meaning, if it doesn't have any advice or suggestions that will aide me in improving this track and/or my skills, I wont reply to it.

Enjoy.

-GST-

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Great

This is actually really good to be honest, it has a very upbeat feel to it that kind of makes you smile for no reason actually. Kind of gives you a feel like you are exploring an area and trying to find things there as well, very upbeat techno tune you have created and I like it.

I can't really find or thing of any way in which this can be improved at all to be honest, sounds like something you would hear an automatic mario video as well. Very nice job on this cool piece.

Review Request Club

Awesome.

Hey GST!! This song is simply awesome dude, like every song of yours, it has a great beat, it's very animated, I simply loved the synths, loved everything man, the drums are super cool, the piano (was it a piano, or I'm crazy??) was super cool.

I loved this songs feeling, it's a very beautiful song, a great melody, and a perfect execution, you made a great melody, and built a great song, with lots of variations, perfect hamony between the instruments, and the drums were leading the song with a perfect synchrony. It's completely awesome.

Man, I loved this song, you're one of m favs authors, this song proves it. Keep it up with the awesome work, and I wanna listen the full version!! :D

-Member of the Review Request Club-

RogerBK

Dj-GST responds:

Thanks man!

Yeah it's a piano :)

Awesome :D I probably put the most work into the drums, so I'm glad you liked them!

I'll send you a PM when the full versions done :)

-GST-

-GST-

awesome...

....i want more. when i read that this track was unfinished i was expectig to hear a really rough recording, but the production on this is clear as a bell, i really cat fault the sound quality at all.
the melodys perfects, though mabey the main synth has a bit of a cliche sound, but i wouldn't want you ruin the track by changing it. the piano parts are aswesome, perfectly suited. the change of speed was great and well executed.
i cant really find anything to criticise here, really looking forward to the completed verion.

Dj-GST responds:

Haha I'm glad you liked it man :D

I'll send you a PM when I've completed it.

-GST-

Nice

Not a bad tune at all. The intro was done really well in my opinion and the song flowed really good. All of the percussion work was to my liking - quick yet controlled. Not quite IDM style, but borderline at times, lol.

The bass line was great and went with the main synth melody well. I can see a couple points where I'm thinking you want to clean up the mixing, but it doesn't sound to bad so far.

The speed up feel that the melody had a couple times was a great idea, and I think you pulled it off well. The song is pretty long too, and I actually left it on repeat for a while whilst editing some photos and totally forgot I was going to review it ;) It's easy to listen to and doesn't get obnoxious fast at all.

Zerest is a good guy, had a few PM convos with him and I like his tunes quite a bit. His piano melody sounds great ;) It's cool to see you two helping each other with songs too. I think you both have great styles and tons of potential. Keep up the great work.

As far as constructive criticism goes, I got nothin. You guys are so much better at making music than me I'd feel like an ass to even criticize anything xD No but really, it sounds great so far and I'd love to hear the finished and polished product.

-RRC-

Dj-GST responds:

Thanks man.

Glad you like the bassline, it took me forever to make a suitable one.

Yeah, tempo build up is sweet :P

Yeah, he is a good guy. I've known him since Grade 9 lol. Alot of our individually made tracks we send over to each other whilst they're still in the making, so the other can point out the flaws that need to be fixed. Every track I have on here he's listened to before anybody else :P

Sweet man, I'll send it over to you when I'm done, it wont be for awhile though.

-GST-

Noice

Sounded really dancey, haha, but had some elements of hard core. Nice and chill too. haha.

The mastering seemed pretty good for a WIP haha. :D

Looking forward for the full song.

Dj-GST responds:

Thanks man :D

I'll send you a message when the full version's done.

Credits & Info

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Listens
1,476
Downloads
40
Votes
7
Score
4.79 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 30, 2010
10:53 PM EST
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
4.9 MB
4 min 18 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.