It's pretty cool.
Well, im listening to it right now, and i definitely dont like that part where it all just stops, that dissapoints me. instead you should have at least like a cymbal crash right when it starts again. well, ......i like the beats a good bit. Nice melody repititions also, but i'd really rather hear a sweeeeeeeet tranced-up melody.
Keep goin' at it!
Let me say this- normally i'm not into this kind of trance- i'm more into the moving, trance-anthem-y kind of stuff. But this is really cool. I like how you open it, and let it progress through the song. It's got a great flow to it as well. GOOD JOB!!
I'd be honored if you'd take a listen to some of my work! Maybe you could give me some pointers.
Seek ye redemption for the sin of conformity.