I'm writing as I'm listening so bear with me,
i like the buildup but the moogish bass in the second portion turns me off a bit.
really interesting bass in the next section (Around 1:00). Its sound like you took an analog and made it digital as fuck. haha. Its all mixed together nicely to sound kinda sneaky and suspenseful. But it kinda seems to lack a climax. I feel like ive been waiting for a nice big drop, but it's not coming. Anyways nice song i guess haha.