Sounds good in my opinion tho, BUT! stay with teh metal please :D!
This made me laugh.
I'm not sure if that's what you were trying to do, but that's what it did. and it really isn't that bad, it's just that you make metal, so your voice on this is like... I really don't know, ironic and funny.
Haha yeahh this isn't a serious song. I mean, it would be lovely if it was taken seriously by some big record label and they signed me and gave me lots of money, but we'll see :P