Needs a Bassline.
That's what's missing. The bassline that gives a song like this flow is missing entirely. You have the build-ups and the good synth but no bassline. Therefore, the song falls.
Don't be such a downer. :) I know it has virtually no baseline, but hey, who knows, I might just finally get the full program and revamp all my songs. <(^_^)>
I am loving this.
Love this, I am a big time ol' punk fan and this reminds me of something I can kick and dance all around too. It goes 'quiter' about half way thru... and I don't know why? But love it still.
Thanks for the review! Like I said though, not going for anything special, this was just something I posted for fun. Maybe I'll come back and turn it up later.