I like this one too...this should be in an action movie or something like that
Ever played the game Deus Ex? The part around the 2 minute mark could have been a track from one of the night clubs in that game. Has some kind of cyberpunk vibe to it.
Try to make the intro a little shorter, or at least spice it up a bit and it'll be better. Still, good job!
tnx for the review:)