but the background in the intro needs to be clearer and maybe more upbeat. the second melody was awesome and perfect. and then when you put the effects in at 1:57 i jizzed all over my computer. sweet but i think needs to have some faster rushes
this is exactly the kind of help I was looking for ;D
Ill try to implement as much of this as possible.
I hope you check out the finished project when I put it up