Seeing as it's a cover, I can't offer much compositional advice. And you're playing ability far exceeds my own, so I can't offer more advice than keep at it. You've got some great talent here. And the best part, it isn't raw. And if that was you doing the singing, great job. You hit all the right notes in all the right places. Each wavelength seems to be exactly where it should be. I personally like this more than the professional song. It's much cleaner. Less wasted sound. There's too much going on in the original for my tastes (don't get me wrong, it's great), but what you have here is a great cover. It's simpler, in a good way, it's strong in the right places, and in my opinion, the guitar doesn't drown out the voices. Great job mate.
one of my favorite songs :D
catchy lyrics, good gutar, and well put togethe. my only issue is that the gutar is a little loud. it overpowers the singing. epic work keep it up
We Collided :)
Our hearts have collided, adn i can say that with full confidence. never forgettin' this song man :) your new guitar sounds freakin' AWESOME. and i swear the high part sounds like PAD to me....you rule, and never forget that.
P.S. Your voice makes me and my friends have ear-gasms XD does that sound very weird...? XD
hey buddy if i have your permission id like to use this in a video of mine your newgrounds (or youtube if u have one) will be featured at the end thanks for posting
sure man, go for it! :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.