The synth in the beginnig kinda of hurt my ears and the synth guitar sounded well like a synth guitar.Not to bad but if you wanted to make it creppy you should have slowed it down some.I liked the bell it was a decent sample.Overall it could of used some fine tuning but it was alright.
Eh, there are so many better songs of mine. Check the top of the muzak list, these down here suck. Well, at least the first 8.
AAH MY EARS!
god.. ow.. my ears.. the synth at the beginning cut out too fast and was very.. unsatisfactory.. i dunno - the whole song lacked polish.. the bell was ok - but even that could have been improved - the quality of this song could have been improved simply with new samples - and then some mastering - mayne slow the tempo down - and add some diversity! And use something other than that guitar!
Neways its only your 2nd song - so who am I to judge - I'll be watching you to see if you submit anything better..
Aww, ye didn't like the geetar? But yeah, I definitely needed to fix the synth at the beginning.
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