this guy tryin to say this don't rhyme makes me laugh cause it does. People on this site are fucking dumb when it comes to any other style of music other than techno which is a terrible style of music.
I TOLD YOU DONT PUT THIS UP MAN, IT SUCKS, I TOLD YOU.....WTF DUDE
NOW WE GOT FAGGOTS LIKE THIS TRYIN TO TALK ABOUT RHYMING AND BEING TERRIBLE AT IT HIMSELF SOUNDIN LIKE A BITCH, probley jacks of to /b/
White rap that's whack.
Sorry but that's a fact. You need to get your rhymes right before you can rhyme tight. Maybe get up in the limelight. But for now it sounds like shite.
have you heard of alliterations? words that sound like other words is another style of rhyming. your fucking retarded lol.
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