It's got good melodies, and I was surprised by the amount of variation thoughout. I especially like 3:42, when the pad kicks in. You probably know what I'm going to say though: a good portion of the song sounds empty. You could put vocals on top, true, but I think it would be even better if you added some lead and pad sounds. Whether you voice them by strings and woodwinds or by synths, I could hear this becoming a truly awesome song.
Thanks alot for the informative review.
I know exactly what part your talking about, and I will be working on this song alot more in the near future, but I'm sort of waiting a little so I can use an actual mic and possibly an electric drum kit.
so once Ive done those, then I will finish off the empty area and work on the continuation of it (which is where the new melody comes in at the end but suddenly stops)