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Nov 21, 2010 | 10:31 PM EST
File Info
4.7 MB
4 min 9 sec
4.04 / 5.00

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Rated 4.04 / 5 stars
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592 Plays | 35 Downloads
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Author Comments

say w/e you want im open to critizim xD....
yeah i type c00Lz



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

And here comes the constructive criticism. :)

The drums here are really "busy." They are constantly playing, which gives the song a somewhat cluttered feel. If you have them playing less often, and perhaps make them stronger, they will be more effective.

The synth that kicked in around 0:07 got a little old, but maybe that's just me. I liked the section that started at 3:22, but you really need to change the string synth to something less synthy.

Also, the song would probably benefit from pads. And you might disagree with me on this, but I can envision the melodies developed here working really well at a slower tempo.

As you can tell, I like to nitpick. Overall though, especially in the melody department, you did a pretty good job.