It kind of sounds like its completely improvised, but if the drummer keeps it together I would really enjoy this. It has mistakes, but I can sense the hints of progressive/experimental influences. At least I think I can, all I can say is practice and keep going. You should check out early fall of troy, cap'n jazz, and perhaps lady radiator for lack of a third example.
haha, yes it was.
The drums are actually artificial, i composed all this is garage band using my guitar and keyboard.
thanks loads for your review, will improve! :)
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