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Nov 20, 2010 | 11:23 PM EST
File Info
4.4 MB
1 min 56 sec
4.08 / 5.00

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Rated 4.08 / 5 stars
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Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal

Author Comments

This song is still a WIP I've been working on in cubase, I've also started trying my hand at a BIT of mastering and quad tracking, however, as a whole, this track is yet to be completed, so tell me what you think of it so far.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

alot of potential

Like you said, it's a work in progress. A couple things I'd suggest:

- mixing the levels a bit more.
- add more bass in there. (you're guitar seems a bit too "treble favored" in my opinion)
- Add some more emphases on your double bass, make it really stand out.
- Make it longer and some more phrasing in there. (What I mean by phrasing is make it so it's not full of repetition)

Other than that great job, I hope that helps any!

SwareBear responds:

Thanks, a lot of you're tips will for sure help, the only thing about my tone is that I decided not to put a TON of low end into it so the bass guitar would stand out a bit more in the mix


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Metal FTW

Ur guitar work is great, and u have great drum beats and intro as well as outro. However definitely not finished as it is not LONG enough.

SwareBear responds:

Thanks broski, like I said, I just started working on this a couple of days ago and wanted to make sure it wasn't a lost cause ;p...When I have time I'm going to start writing some more for this, still haven't thought of what to put after the breakdown